Last Line of your Major Work? (3 Viewers)

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"The mass of blue blazers surrounding him were no comfort, no different to his own, and he looked quietly out of the window as though waiting for something bad to happen."

*hugs last line* I love it like a cat loves milk.
 

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"In the fading light they giddily gripped each other, delirious with grief and overwhelmed with relief."



I had the ending before everything else i think hehe.
 

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123erykb said:
"not with a bang, but a whimper"

I know, cliche, but its for a film and its narration, so its sorta alright.

Haha Eliot; Hollow men.

Mines currently
'I still see, and this is where i'll stay, experiencing the rest of my life through my authors eyes'


however apparently its too sad/pathos ridden considering how comical/farcical the whole piece had been so i have to 'cheer it up'
 

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"Their blood ran over the stone floor as Attila smirked. Love? What did a warrior know of love?"

mine is three stories, that is the last line of the last story
 

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The twenty-ninth became the thirtieth, and the city pulsed on
...The formatting for this post is all screwed up and i dont know why. Anyway that's my last line and i'm in the process of rewriting like half my bloody story because i've just had a major epiphany. And then i have to write my reflection statement! Oh god!


 
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jimmayyy said:
the last line of mine is "you have to set yourself on fire."

anyone who can tell me where it comes from gets a cookie
Its from the lyrics of "Your Ex-Lover is Dead" by Stars.. it was on one of the OC soundtracks.

Do I get a cookie??? ~puppy dog eyes~


And the last line of my story is: "[FONT=&quot]And like life, the afterlife has flaws."[/FONT]
 

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I have two stories intertwined within one story -

Story 1 - 'For Rhoswen, the road would be ever long'
Story 2 - 'Lilacs, a beautiful bunch of lilacs. They were her mothers favourite'
 

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Tulipa said:
No comma before the "and"

Don't they teach you kiddies sentence punctuation at all?
Mine's for dramatic pause, punctuation goes to hell in the name of creativity? :p
 

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Aw, not "And like that, *poof* he's gone?" Because that would have been cool. Well, not really.
 

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RiCkiE said:
Aw, not "And like that, *poof* he's gone?" Because that would have been cool. Well, not really.
Hahahaha. Not quite. It would kinda wreak the atmosphere. Shatter it.
 

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One line of melody triumphs, silencing the other voices, slowly moving towards a single, resonating note.





I feel so sad that ee2 is over =(
 

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Tulipa said:
*sigh*

That is exactly why the world is going to hell. No one understands the role of language and punctuation in communication anymore.
Hehehe, next terrorist attack: Classic literature's gramma edited to the point of insanity.
 

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the last line for my story is

"i close the curtain."

wat do ya think?
 

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