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Last Line of your Major Work? (1 Viewer)

emdrinan

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"There were so many doors which I might choose to open or close, and when one closed, another opened."

ahahaha so cliche i know-- but yeah...
 

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'The image of the flame burnt into my dreams.'

But it's not the real end, if that makes sense (you'd have to get context to understand i suspect), but the prologue is the end of the epilogue.

'Sure, the only thing I had left was the rest of my life.'

So i've got two
 
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A quote:

Living to live in a world of time beyond me; let me
Resign my life for this life, my speech for that unspoken,
The awakened, lips parted, the hope, the new ships.

Best find all extension 2. Fits the story perfectly so I had to get it in.
 

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I do realise this thread is a year old but couldn't resist starting it up again:

"I carry them with me, wherever I go."

I love my last line.
 

emo-kid-91

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Hysterik said:
I do realise this thread is a year old but couldn't resist starting it up again.
haha, awesome.

"She made a difference."

booyah. optimistic ending, yo. we don't get enough of those in stories nowadays. should make mine stand out, let's hope.
 

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"For colour is all in all a far too familiar placebo"
 

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It doesn't matter who it is from, only that it is from; this piece is enough.



yay i like it :) happy end haha
 
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"She glances at her watch: seven–eighteen, bringing back a fleeting memory incipit possibly to another distortion in time."
 

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'We are all plain pieces of paper trying to fold our way through life.'
 

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[FONT=&quot]'Freshly printed papers flutter, warm, around the room as Jonathan opens his twentieth-storey window and raises a silent toast to Apple Blossom.' [/FONT]​
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I'm doing a Critical Response, but here's my line anyway...

"To hold such a creature in our arms? Who, you ask me, would be so mad? Well...?"
 

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It's actually a critical piece, not a story:


"Exposing ourselves to a range of frames is as much a part of understanding our own reading as it is of understanding those of others; as we displace ourselves to be positioned into the perspective of another, we are simultaneously set free to look back and examine our own line of sight – an action we would be well to apply to more than just the reading of literature."

It's long, but technically a sentence :D
 

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