x_symphonic
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- Joined
- Oct 11, 2009
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- Gender
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- HSC
- 2009
Thanks everyone for the positive comments. Yes, i agree that i try a bit too hard and that the story drags the mark down. You guys were correct ^^
Well, my teacher said i would get a b+ for this and a better storyline, esp the ending would increase it to an A.
Thanks again and good luck for your english hsc 2mrw guys
Well, my teacher said i would get a b+ for this and a better storyline, esp the ending would increase it to an A.
Thanks again and good luck for your english hsc 2mrw guys
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