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[beve]

And I would really rather like it if you good people could read my Major Work and pick it to pieces.

Folie a Plusieurs. EX2. by ~ExplodingDog on deviantART

 

[imsopostmodern]

what are you essentially trying to do with this work? just to make it easier to give appropriate comments.


btw, you should NOT put a complete draft on the internet where it's accessible to everyone. i realise you left a note at the end asking people not to copy it, but you can NOT trust that.

 

[beve]

what are you essentially trying to do with this work? just to make it easier to give appropriate comments.


btw, you should NOT put a complete draft on the internet where it's accessible to everyone. i realise you left a note at the end asking people not to copy it, but you can NOT trust that.

well if anyone asks to plagarise it, i have more than sufficient proof to say that i was the one writing it. but ok. i'll take it down.

from my report:

My major work, ‘Folie à Plusieurs, or; The Madness of Many’, examines religion as a societal force in modern Australian society following the advent of the War on Terrorism. The two societal effects of Religion addressed in my Major Work are:

1. Religion as a cause of animosity between social groups in Modern Australia.
2. The influence of Religion in Australian politics.

Through the exploration of the two aforementioned issues in Folie à Plusieurs, or; The Madness of Many’, I have been able to communicate the allegorical purpose of my Major Work, as outlined in its Proposal – “to promote the furthering of secularity in the modern world.”

 

[dizzyizzy]

You've taken it down obv, but from the abstract there it sounds awesome...furthering secularity....very cool

 

[beve]

You've taken it down obv, but from the abstract there it sounds awesome...furthering secularity....very cool

thankyou very much. add me on msn if you want to read it. i took it down off deviantart because it pulled something like 200 views and meanwhile about 3 people commented on it; sure, there might have just been people who didn't touch it, but getting that kind of attention drawn to it spooked me a little..

so yeah.