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Give it a mark out of 15 and tell me what's good and what's not. Thanks! I would appreciate some constructive criticism as well :)


To what extent do penalties imposed during the sentencing process achieve justice for victims, offenders and society? (15 marks)
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To a considerable extent, are penalties, imposed during the sentencing process, both effective and ineffective in achieving justice for victims, offenders and society. The Crimes (Sentencing and Procedure) Act 1999 (NSW) is perceived as the main source for statutory guidelines regarding the sentencing process. It includes the purposes of punishment, types of penalties, limitations on penalties and states that imprisonment is the last resort. This legislation also outlines the various factors which must be considered for sentencing, for example, mitigating and aggravating factors and the personal state of mind of the offender.

Moreover, an evaluation of the effectiveness of penalties imposed during the sentencing process in achieving justice for victims, offenders and society, should not occur, without due consideration of the following criteria:
  • Protection of individual rights, that is, are penalties, imposed during the sentencing process effective as they protect the rights of individuals, that of both the offender and the victim?
  • Meeting society's needs, that is, are penalties, imposed during the sentencing process effective because they meet the needs of the community?

Firstly, it can be argued that penalties imposed during the sentencing process are both effective and ineffective in protecting the rights of offenders. For example, the case of R. v. Fernando (1992), set a precedence for the future sentencing of Aboriginal offenders. It was decided that Fernando was guilty of malicious wounding his de facto partner. An implication of this case is tremendous, as it established the “Fernando principles”, which take reduced socio-economic circumstances and loss of customary law into account when sentencing indigenous offenders. Thus, testifying to the effectiveness of the law, in protecting the rights of offenders. However, despite state parliament's enactment of the Crimes (Sentencing and Procedure) Act 1999 (NSW), the issue of sentencing delays remains unresolved. According to Geesche Jacobsen of “The Sydney Morning Herlad”, 24th September 2011, “Court statistics show sentencing delays have doubled in the past decade and the government has announced a review of sentencing practices”, hence showcasing the ineffective nature of the law in protecting the rights of offenders during the sentencing process, but the willingness to reform inadequacies to protect the individual rights of offenders.

Next, it can be argued that penalties imposed during the sentencing process are both effective and ineffective in protecting the rights of the victim. For instance, state parliament's enactment of the Victims Rights Act 1996 (NSW), ensures the objective is to promote and recognise the rights of victims in a crime. Furthermore, the Victims Support and Rehabilitation Act 1996 (NSW), supports the statutory compensation scheme, which involves the imposition of a levy on criminals as well as a counselling scheme. This legislation also advocates the use of victim impact statements during the sentencing process when determining a penalty. Additionally, the Australian Institute of Criminology (February 1989), states that victim impact statements are pivotal as they prevent judicial officers from neglecting the effects of a serious crime upon a victim, and resulting in a less than adequate penalty for the offender. This highlights the effectiveness of the legal system in protecting the rights of victims and administering justice during the sentencing process. Despite this, the Crimes Case Conferencing Trial Act 2008 (NSW), regulates discounts associated with plea bargaining. This can be understood as ineffective for victims, as offenders may be given a lesser sentencing for pleading guilty prior to the committal. Hence, the sentencing process if both effective and ineffective in protecting the rights of the victim.

Thirdly, the penalties imposed during the sentencing process are effective in achieving justice for society and meeting the needs of the community. For example, in the case of R v. AEM, R v. KEM and R v. MM (2002) (NSWCCA), there was public outrage that these teenagers were handed sentences of only six years for gang rape. The eldest, AEM, was given a non-parole period of four years, whilst his brother KEM and cousin, MM had non-parole periods of three years. The Crown appealed the leniency of the sentences and the NSW Court of Criminal Appeal increased each of the non-parole sentences to 9 years, 10 years and 10 years respectively. An implication of this case was tremendous, as it served as a catalyst for the Crimes Amendment (Aggravated Sexual Assault in Company) Act 2001 (NSW). This amended the law, so that judges could impose longer sentences. This was seen in the case of R v. Skaf and Skaf (2008) (NSWCCA), where Judge Finnane sentences Bilal Skaf to 55 years imprisonment and Mohammed Skaf to 18 years (upon appeal this was changed to 35 years and 12 years, respectively). According to Judge Michael Finnane, “these were horrific atrocities which were of detriment to society”. Thus, the steps of the legal system in relation to the heinous crime, testifies to the effectiveness of penalties imposed during the sentencing process in achieving justice for society.

In conclusion, the penalties imposed during the sentencing process are both effective and ineffective in achieving justice for victims, offenders and society. In relation to protecting individual rights, penalties take into account the rights of both the offender and victim and attempt to balance out these rights. For protecting society's needs, the penalties protect society from heinous crimes, such as sexual assault in company and ensure that the rights of members of society are upheld and protected.



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I think that would get a 12
To get the 15 you would need:

* to get rid of your dot points
* Victim Impact Statements while achieving justice to victims do not for offenders as they are based purely on how well an indiviudal victim or their family can articulate their suffering
* Mention the onus and standard of proof
* mention aggravating and mitigating more
* talk about a type of penalty such as a fine:
- quick, easy to implement
- no protection to society
- little compensation for victim
- somewhat effective on the offender depending on their income/wealth


Overall, excellent response, fantastic use of cases, legislation etc. Good luck :)
 

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Evaluation stuff is good but like for this question id talk more about actual penalties like imprisonment or fines... thought your not going to get this question
This. your evaluation and use of cases is good, but, i would structure on what penalties. eg. start from smallest to largest fines --> CSO ---> Imprisonment etc and evaluate how each of the penalties does justice for one or the other (that way you can get better evaluation such as imprisonment = short-term justice for society but in the long-run u get recidivism rates etc etc)
Probs a 12 or 13 atm
 

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This. your evaluation and use of cases is good, but, i would structure on what penalties. eg. start from smallest to largest fines --> CSO ---> Imprisonment etc and evaluate how each of the penalties does justice for one or the other (that way you can get better evaluation such as imprisonment = short-term justice for society but in the long-run u get recidivism rates etc etc)
Probs a 12 or 13 atm
This. structuring by penalties would be a better idea because you won't confuse the marker as much as evaluating by victims, the accused and society.
 

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Overall, your response is very good as it is well structured and contains strong analysis which is supported by a significant amount of cases/media reports and legislation. However, the most glaring issue with your response is the language and clarity. At times your language is very clunky which makes it difficult to understand what you are trying to saying. Although you cannot be directly marked down for this, if your ideas arent being effectively and clearly conveyed to the marker then it will hurt your marks somewhat. Also, try not to use dot points in the opening paragraph - just list the thesis and list your reasons briefly. So in saying that, I'd give this around a 12-13/15, but it could be more if you work on making the language better and more clear.
 

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You should talk more about imprisonment, fines, Home Detention, etc, and the effects it has on victims, society and the offender. Like, for example, for Imprisonment you could talk about how it acheives internal peace, and balances the interest of the victim/s and society. Maybe also mention how imprisonment restrains offenders from maintaining community ties, therefore a form of retribution.
Also, your language is a bit off at times. Your first sentence doesn't really make sense. Just say "To a considerable extent, penalties imposed during the sentencing process are effective and in-effective in achieving justice for victim/s, society and the offender, and this will be accessed through...

Overall, I'd give this a 12.
 
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Thanks for your replies everyone! I really appreciate the feedback.

Just a question though, if you base it around penalties, say you have a paragraph on imprisonment, what type of cases and legislation would you use and statistics + media reports
 

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I don't do Legal Studies, so I am not sure, but you could probably use cases to show the extent of the effectiveness of imprisonment by throwing in a few cases where the legal system can use imprisonment to remove someone harmful from society's grounds. For example, "The effectiveness of imprisonment in acheiving justice for individuals, victim/s and society is clearly representated in the case R vs. Harris (2004) (QLD) where an accused sexual molester came before the law and was was convicted. This issue that this case represents is the effectiveness of imprisonment in acheiving internal peice, safety and security. Henceforth, this shows the effectiveness of imprisonment in acheive justice for individuals, offenders and victim/s."

Something like that. For a media report, probably just a article with something to do with imprisonment and it effects. Just make sure it supports your argument.
 

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TBH it appears that you have changed the question to the effectiveness of the law and not really focussed on extent penalty attain justice and the question. Really good references to legislation and case studies. I would give this around 10-12.
 

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