2023 HSC chat (6 Viewers)

[s9a]

@s9a is this better <3

One’s perception of the world is subject to change over time. Eliot’s poetry is no different, transforming over time to reflect his current state of mind on critical modernist opinions, most notably, his depictions of spirituality and man’s connection to himself. Thus, this statement is true to a large extent, as seen in Eliot’s contrasting poems, “The Hollow Men” and “Journey of the Magi”, which demonstrate starkly different representations of the subject matter of spirituality. “The Hollow Men”, which conveys Eliot’s post-WW2 depression and lack of hope, depicts a world void of spirituality and connection, suggesting that man is trapped within a hopeless reality. On the other hand, the more optimistic “Journey of the Magi” demonstrates how by finding spirituality, the individual is able to transcend the physical constraints of the modern world to find a better purpose. Evidently, by framing different opinions throughout his changing poetic repertoire, Eliot’s poetic style and approach on critical subject matters change over time.

perfect!!! this intro alone will get u 20/20 dw ab the rest of the essat

 

[nsw..wollongong]

predicting atars for people
@synthesisFR 99.3
@carrotsss 99.75
@Masaken somewhere in 99s
@SadCeliac high 98
others idk

what happened to me

 

[carrotsss]

so 71 in nsb21 is like mid-high b6??? hooray ig

I’d say more like 92-93

 

[nsw..wollongong]

Kys

what is there to cry abt now its literally a 99.3

 

[carrotsss]

predicting atars for people
@synthesisFR 99.3
@carrotsss 99.75
@Masaken somewhere in 99s
@SadCeliac high 98
others idk

Im pretty confident synthesis will get a 99.5+ (and wouldn’t be surprised if 99.75+) based on what he’s said about results

 

[s9a]

guys what atar do u think jimmy got

 

[SadCeliac]

perfect!!! this intro alone will get u 20/20 dw ab the rest of the essat

wow so good thanks <3

 

[nsw..wollongong]

UR ALL THE ROOTS OF MY DEPRESSION YALL OUT HERE COMPLAINING ABT 99.3 GTFO

 

[SadCeliac]

@s9a is this better <3

One’s perception of the world is subject to change over time. Eliot’s poetry is no different, transforming over time to reflect his current state of mind on critical modernist opinions, most notably, his depictions of spirituality and man’s connection to himself. Thus, this statement is true to a large extent, as seen in Eliot’s contrasting poems, “The Hollow Men” and “Journey of the Magi”, which demonstrate starkly different representations of the subject matter of spirituality. “The Hollow Men”, which conveys Eliot’s post-WW2 depression and lack of hope, depicts a world void of spirituality and connection, suggesting that man is trapped within a hopeless reality. On the other hand, the more optimistic “Journey of the Magi” demonstrates how by finding spirituality, the individual is able to transcend the physical constraints of the modern world to find a better purpose. Evidently, by framing different opinions throughout his changing poetic repertoire, Eliot’s poetic style and approach on critical subject matters change over time.

someone please properly read this fr thanks

 

[carrotsss]

guys what atar do u think jimmy got

I estimate 92.10

 

[tywebb]

Aim for 100 and maybe you will get 99.95.

 

[Masaken]

@s9a is this better <3

One’s perception of the world is subject to change over time. Eliot’s poetry is no different, transforming over time to reflect his current state of mind on critical modernist opinions, most notably, his depictions of spirituality and man’s connection to himself. Thus, this statement is true to a large extent, as seen in Eliot’s contrasting poems, “The Hollow Men” and “Journey of the Magi”, which demonstrate starkly different representations of the subject matter of spirituality. “The Hollow Men”, which conveys Eliot’s post-WW2 depression and lack of hope, depicts a world void of spirituality and connection, suggesting that man is trapped within a hopeless reality. On the other hand, the more optimistic “Journey of the Magi” demonstrates how by finding spirituality, the individual is able to transcend the physical constraints of the modern world to find a better purpose. Evidently, by framing different opinions throughout his changing poetic repertoire, Eliot’s poetic style and approach on critical subject matters change over time.

why is bro talking about artist of the floating world in the beginning

 

[carrotsss]

UR ALL THE ROOTS OF MY DEPRESSION YALL OUT HERE COMPLAINING ABT 99.3 GTFO

synthesis has been working hard he deserves it

 

[SadCeliac]

I estimate 92.10

@jimmysmith560 ???!!?!!? we need an atar estimate for jimmy

 

[s9a]

i've like no impression of u

based of no impression
thanks bae i love u sm

 

[SadCeliac]

why is bro talking about artist of the floating world in the beginning

what did I do wrong bro I just thought that was a good segway starting line

 

[SadCeliac]

can I just say @scaryshark09 is gaslighting everyone with his profile rn

man aint a year 10 student

 

[s9a]

go eat bread bitch

 

[carrotsss]

predicting atars for people
@synthesisFR 99.3
@carrotsss 99.75
@Masaken somewhere in 99s
@SadCeliac high 98
others idk

also I highly doubt I’d get 99.75 at this point, maths/chem are good (unless I screw up they are 99.95 equiv based on trials) but English and esp physics are a problem rn, and I’ve also been doing way less work than I should’ve lately

tbf I only need an 80 ATAR for my course anyway

 

[Masaken]

what did I do wrong bro I just thought that was a good segway starting line

pls don't do that, that is cringe (genuinely from an english marker's viewpoint), there's no point to introduce a random text you don't know that much about - it wastes time

i'd say start your essay with a very strong thesis - the thesis is the marker's first impression of ur essay (you can either memorise one and adapt in the exam or just have a basic idea then make it up in the exam), so for the above q directly answer the question with the already good ideas you have in your intro (eg. Examining the [thematic? just put an adjective here that's relevant] transformation of Eliot's poetry allows for valuable insights on [introduce idea, probably Modernism and spirituality here], through which [blah] is revealed.)

also since it's an evaluate question i'd say use evaluative language for the funsies like Eliot effectively [blah], etc.