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no, they are essential, cuz they are innovative (im pretty sure i know what you did) its this kind of shit that makes your story stand out.hingec said:I had them as a way of breaking up the flashback sort of temporal fragmentation (yes, i said that just to sound pretentious). They aren't essential and if they're not something you put in normally you probably shouldn't keep them, i think the paragraphing works well enough with the blank lines..
But then again, I like them
Really more use for longer stories though where its not just single paragraphs that are removed from the narrative flow.