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[goldendawn]

Alan LOVES the before and after of storms! It might sound werid, but he feels it gives him power, exhilaration, strength! He feels like he has a mild form of Berserk.

Marcus agrees with Alan, but Marcus unfortunately also get headaches, "hehe". Marcus believes that storms are sincere, so serene or so violent, but always beautiful.

 

[Llyrai]

Here for yours and Marcus's Reading pleasure.

*groans....pdf!? Whatever happened to good olde word!?

Lol! im all complaints, dw, thanks!

 

[ujuphleg]

Good Night Justin!!!

 

[Llyrai]

"Good night Justin! HAve fun tmr!...PHOTOS!"

 

[ujuphleg]

*groans....pdf!? Whatever happened to good olde word!?

Lol! im all complaints, dw, thanks!

its in PDF so that no body can copy it....

if its really that much of a problem, Susan can provide it for you in word. Lynn wanted a copy she could keep, so Susan can oblige if so....

Susan wonders where Lynn has disappeared to.... ?

EDIT: to wash her hair of course....

 

[goldendawn]

Justin has decided that he will go to bed, as he has his formal tomorrow.

"Good night, all."

Marcus hopes Justin has a good sleep, and also hopes that he enjoys his formal tomorrow!

 

[goldendawn]

its in PDF so that no body can copy it....

if its really that much of a problem, Susan can provide it for you in word. Lynn wanted a copy she could keep, so Susan can oblige if so....

Susan wonders where Lynn has disappeared to.... ?

Marcus informs Susan that Lynn has gone off to wash her hair, and will be back shortly. Marcus also tells Susan that PDF is fine.

 

[ujuphleg]

Susan says "good good"

Susan enquires as to what was the title of Marcus's and Alan's major works again?

 

[glitterfairy]

Lynn wishes Justin goodbye and lots of fun tommorrow!

 

[goldendawn]

Marcus: Children of Time
Alan: The Beast who Cried 'I' At the Heart of the World

(Marcus thinks that is right...Alan probably knows better than Marcus, "lol".)

 

[ujuphleg]

"Hi Lynn!!"

Susan is excited about Spec. Susan enquires (and apologises if she has already asked before) as to which song Lynn is dancing to?

 

[Llyrai]

Alans Major Work is titled:

The Beast That Shouted 'I' At The Heart Of The World

 

[glitterfairy]

Lynn thinks she is dancing to "Music is the Language of us all". Lynn really only attended two half-rehearsals (she left early to go cram for HSC) and still does not know her placings nor the finale, which is odd as Lynn by this stage is normally fully aware of where she is and teaching others chorey they missed.

Oh well! *Lynn shrugs*

 

[Llyrai]

Marcus: Children of Time
Alan: The Beast who Cried 'I' At the Heart of the World

(Marcus thinks that is right...Alan probably knows better than Marcus, "lol".)

HAhah SHOUTED SHOUTED!!!

Alan had a two day long debate discussion with his teacher about the two terms! Alan decided on shouted!

 

[glitterfairy]

Lynn is glad Alan chose "shouted". It makes it seem as if the protagonist is more in control of the situation, that it is a willing choice.

 

[Llyrai]

Lynn is glad Alan chose "shouted". It makes it seem as if the protagonist is more in control of the situation, that it is a willing choice.

Yes! Alan agrees. He felt that 'shouted' made the scene feel as if the 'beast' had struggled, but won the situation. 'Cried', to Alan, feels more like a desperate plea, on the edge of losing hope.

 

[glitterfairy]

Lynn understands and agrees. Just a change of one word can much SUCH a difference.

 

[goldendawn]

Marcus is sincerely sorry!!

Marcus sees the necessity of "shouted". He also understands that the use of "that" instead of "who" objectifies the protagonist, and initiates the central theme as the search for a SELF-DEFINED personal identity.

 

[Llyrai]

*nods.

But Alan confesses, that, unless it is his own work, it is rare that he would note the power of a single word.

 

[Llyrai]

Marcus is sincerely sorry!!

Marcus sees the necessity of "shouted". He also understands that the use of "that" instead of "who" objectifies the protagonist, and initiates the central theme as the search for a SELF-DEFINED personal identity.

Yes, and 'that' has an ambiguity to it, which is what Alan wanted.