Hey there, your PM box is full so I had to reply here
Thanks so much for the feedback, that's really helpful
1. I used this sentence as I felt I really needed to let the marker's know that I wasn't deviating from the question - but I can see now how that I probably could expect that their understanding of 'texts' wasn't strictly just literary
3. I actually liked the analysis of music because I thought it nobody else would have done it - do you think it's farfetched, or just irrelevant to an english essay? As a musician it seems like the music in that scene was a fairly direct allusion (there's a better word for this) to that composer. Maybe i'm just being pretentious. Should I not bank on a marker to agree?
4. That was just a mis-edit, I had another draft that had all 3 of those themes.
Also, would it be possible for you to give it a mark?
Again, thanks a ton