Hey there, your PM box is full so I had to reply here
Thanks so much for the feedback, that's really helpful
1. I used this sentence as I felt I really needed to let the marker's know that I wasn't deviating from the question - but I can see now how that I probably could expect that their understanding of 'texts' wasn't strictly just literary
3. I actually liked the analysis of music because I thought it nobody else would have done it - do you think it's farfetched, or just irrelevant to an english essay? As a musician it seems like the music in that scene was a fairly direct allusion (there's a better word for this) to that composer. Maybe i'm just being pretentious. Should I not bank on a marker to agree?
4. That was just a mis-edit, I had another draft that had all 3 of those themes.
Also, would it be possible for you to give it a mark?
i'm tired but thankfully no school until the 28th
I'm in year 10 but I'm accelerated in maths and chemistry.
Thanks for the tips. do u know any tutoring companies that offer umat? Cos I just read through some questions and it seems section 2 will be my weakest.
BTW do u got to uws???
How are u?
Since school holidays have started, i think it's a great time to start studying for the umat.
Can u please give me tips on how to study for umat.
BTW i have sent u a friend request.
Have a good holiday
Would have said how everyone made it famous and how the abnormality in its shape gave it a focus of belonging to a different race. So in a way, the point would be something like "If you stand out you will belong."
But I had a better creative based on a real life experience anyway.