accio.brain, I just read yours and loved it. At first I was a bit confused about who all the people were, and I had to go back a few times to remember which name went with each character, but that could just be my bad memory... Also, I didn't realise until I read your RS that the first-person narrator was the art gallery, though, again, that was probably me not being very perceptive.
That said, I love your use of language. I'm not a massive fan of the style of narrative you wrote (I generally prefer more straightforward, linear pieces...) but I read your story straight through. I loved the sunflower motif. The whole thing made me sigh and smile. I feel like going and dancing in a field of sunflowers now. Or something. lol.
I'm sure you'll get a fantastic mark.
I'm in awe of everyone who manages to say so much in their reflection statements, and yet stays firmly within the word count. I feel like I had to cut so much out, and I didn't get to say half of what I should have.
edit: mrs destiny, you should post it! We don't bite.*
*hard
That said, I love your use of language. I'm not a massive fan of the style of narrative you wrote (I generally prefer more straightforward, linear pieces...) but I read your story straight through. I loved the sunflower motif. The whole thing made me sigh and smile. I feel like going and dancing in a field of sunflowers now. Or something. lol.
I'm sure you'll get a fantastic mark.
I'm in awe of everyone who manages to say so much in their reflection statements, and yet stays firmly within the word count. I feel like I had to cut so much out, and I didn't get to say half of what I should have.
edit: mrs destiny, you should post it! We don't bite.*
*hard